Monday, April 16, 2012

The Tortoise and the Hare by Sam Wong


Once upon a time,in a big forest,there lived a slow tortoise and a lazy hare.
The tortoise and hare were best friends but one day, the lazy hare said, ''You run very slow, but I run very fast.'' The tortoise felt very sad.

Then, the green tortoise and a hare decided to have a race. The hare ran very fast but the tortoise ran slowly. The hare couldn't see where the tortoise was so it slept under a green tree. The hare said, ''You ran slowly. You can't beat me!''

After that the tortoise ran and ran and he saw the hare sleeping, so the tortoise ran even faster.

In the end, the tortoise won. The tortoise was very excited. The hare learnt that we should not be lazy and the tortoise learnt that we should not give up.

5 comments:

  1. I think your writing is interesting because you used adjectives like "lazy" and adverbs like "slowly". Good job!

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  2. I like your fable because you have many good word

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  3. Ilike your fable because you text is very excicing

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  4. I think your writing is interesting because you used good adjectives .Good job!

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