Friday, April 13, 2012

The Tortoise and the Hare by Hay


Once a upon a time, the green tortoise and the fast hare went in the big forest. They wanted to have a race.
First, they went to the big forest road to get ready for the race because they wanted to see who was the fastest in the race.
Next, they went to the big road to do the war up exercise and got ready to begin the race. Then, they started to say,¨3,2,1,Go!”The race began. The first one was the fast hare. He thought,¨ I am so tired!” Then ,the hare saw a big tree and the hare went to the foot of the tree to relax. Next, the green tortoise passed the hare and the hare woke up. He said to tortoise,¨you are too foolish and slow.” Then the hare ran and run just like a lion. Then the fast hare met three beautiful hare girls. The fast hare played tennis with the girls.
At last, the hare saw the tortoise almost won, so the hare tried to catch up with the tortoise but the tortoise won the long race. The green tortoise was very overjoyed and said to hare¨Don’t be too proud.”
Finally, the hare learnt not to be too proud and the tortoise learn not to give up.

4 comments:

  1. I like your fable because you use good tence

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  2. I like your fable because you can have good spelling but I think your fable is not many taking sencens.

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  3. I love your story!!!It told us many thing

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  4. I like your fable because you can have good adj

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