Friday, April 13, 2012
The Little Red Hen by Rebecca
Once upon a time a little red hen lived on the farm. She was hard working.
She planted the grain every day
because she wanted to eat the
delicious bread. But,all farm animals said
〝You are foolish! Don,t plant the grain! 〞The little red hen always said,
〝One day,I can enjoy my tasty food! 〞
Every day ,the farm animals were playing
the games like eating grass ,sleeping…but
little red hen just planted the grain.
One day, the grain was excited and happy.
〝I can eat the tasty bread! 〞said the little red hen. The farm animals. The little
red hen got n a big bowl of bread.
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I like your "The Little Red Hen" fable because you can write the fable interesting and funny. Next time, you can write more words about, do the farm animals say sorry to the little hen? At last, do the farm animal can eat the bread together?...So, your fable will better than now.
ReplyDeleteYour fable is good , I like it because it is funny.
ReplyDeleteIt is good but you can write more word
ReplyDeleteI like your fable because it make me know this world didn't have to reap without sowing
ReplyDeleteI very very enjoy reading your fable because you have many funny words
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