Friday, April 13, 2012

The Three Axes by Agnes


Once upon a time, in an enormous farm near a big pond, there were two greedy farmers. In the farm, there was a lot of food, like chocolate, bread, margarine, toast ….

The first greedy farmer dropped one old red axe in the pond. The farmer said, “It was an accident, please give it back to me. “ Then, a beautiful queen quickly flew up to the blue sky and asked the farmer, “I have three axes: one is gold, one is silver and one is red. Which axe is yours? The greedy farmer thought, “If I say the gold is mine, then I will be rich.” The greedy farmer said, “The gold is mine!” The beautiful queen knew the gold one was not his, so she did not give anything to the greedy farmer. The greedy farmer thought, “The beautiful queen is bad!”

Then, the second farmer found another blue axe in the farm and dropped an axe in the pond. The greedy farmer thought, “It is an accidental!” After than, a beautiful queen of the pond slowly flew up to the sky and asked the farmer, “One is gold, one is silver and one is blue. I will give you one more chance. If you are honest.” The greedy farmer thought, “I must be honest.” The farmer said, “The blue is mine!” Then, the farmer got three new axes. The farmer thought, “I am rich now.”

Later, the farmer was rich and lived in a mansion. The farmer learnt we must be honest.

14 comments:

  1. Your pome is great!And you write many difficult words!

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  2. I agree with you, Rynnae! She tried her best to use many difficult words. She used words from the RB, TB and DR! Good job!

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  3. good you have many word.

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  4. I like your writing because it is wonderful

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  5. I like your fable because you write many words Good Job!

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  6. I like your fable because you write many new words and it was many saying words.I can't believe.Frighting!

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  7. Great!You can let the Chinese mythology to be a English fable and you can use the easy word and sentence to expression.

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  8. I like your fable because it is very interesting.

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  9. I like your fable because it was many words and it make me very interesting.

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  10. I like your fable you have many adj (Nicole)

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  11. I like your fable because you write many good words and it have many talking sentences.I can't believe my eyes.Good jog!

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  12. I like your fable bcause you have many words and this fable is interesting.

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    1. i like your fable bcause you have many words and adj

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  13. Chan Kai Lok, MichaelApril 16, 2012 at 7:07 AM

    Your fable "The Three Axes" is very amusing. You use many great talking sentences to describe what feeling of the main charactar .That make me more understand about the charactar. Beside, you use many good adjectives to make your fable more better!

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