Friday, April 13, 2012

The Three Little Pigs by Emily


Once upon a time, the three little pigs wanted to build a beautiful house in the green forest because the mother wanted them to look after your selves. The mother said , “They will build the prettiest house.
The first lazy pig used many grass to build the house. It was very quickly. The first lazy pig saw the sly wolf wanted to eat things and wanted to come to his house. The sly wolf said , “Quickly open the door.” The pig was scared and don’t come out. The sly wolf said ‘“I will blow your house down.’’ The pig shouted , “Help me !Help me!’’ The sly wolf blew and blew. The house fell down easily. He felt scared.
Then, the first pig ran to the second pig’s house. The second pig used many branches because branches are stronger than the first pig’s grass. The wolf said , “Quickly open the door .’’The pig shouted, “Help me! Help me!’’ The sly wolf blew and blew. The house fell down. They felt scared.
Next, the first pig and the second pig ran to the youngest pig because he was the most hardworking. The house was made from bricks because it was the strongest house. The cunning wolf went to the youngest pig’s house. The cunning wolf said , “If you don’t open the door , I will blow your house down.’’ They did not feel frightened because it was very strong. The sly wolf blew and blew but the house did not fall down.
Lastly, the cunning wolf went to a hospital because he blew many times. They thought , “It did not fall down .’’ The cunning wolf learnt to not always believe what others say and the pigs shouldn’t be lazy.

11 comments:

  1. I like your writing because you have many words

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  3. I hear many time since I was a baby.

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  4. I think your fable is interesting because you use many talking sentence

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  5. I think I will try my best to write my writing.4D class we will try your best to learn English.The test will better than first time. We try your best .Mr.Wong will try to teach 4D class .We cannot make Mr.Wong angry because we did like angry teacher.I hope 4D class we will try your best to learn English.

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  6. you fable is interesting

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  11. I like it because it has many words.

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