Dear Mr. Wong
Hey! Where did you go on 11th November?
On 11th November in the morning, I was very
surprised. Mum woke me up early. She said to me, “We will go to Disneyland because you have good marks in your test!” All
the people in my family went to play. I played many games with my cousins! At
that night, I had a wonderful dinner in the Disneyland
Hollywood Hotel
Chef Mickey Restaurant which
is near Disneyland . This restaurant was very
special because it serves a lot of famous food from different countries!
When we got in, a waiter and waitress took us to our table which was
beside the window and could let us see Disneyland .
They were very kind and asked us, “Sir and madam, what drink do you want?” They
wore clean uniforms and had a white towel on their arms. The restaurant’s
floors were very clean. The waiter showed us where we could get the delicious
food. There was a long and big round table where could get the delicious food.
We sat at a long table with many sofa chairs. I saw many rich foods, for
example, icy Alaskan King crab, sushi, ham pizza, ice-cream, dim sum…. I heard some beautiful music and I saw a lot of
pretty pictures of flowers. This restaurant made me feel very comfortable!
My cousin and I opened our big
eyes when we saw the delicious food. We ran to get the food quickly. I tried
many things, like icy Alaskan King crab, sea food fried rice, wasabi sushi set,
banana ice-cream, mango jelly…and many more foods! The Alaskan
King carb was very fresh and cool, I ate two crabs! The ham pizza was very
crispy and spicy! I liked it very much! I also tried prawn noodles with lobster
sauce too! Besides these foods, I also ate a lot of delicious food! I also
drank cool apple juice with ice. After I finished the food, I went to get food,
two, three…times!
After we finished the main
course, we had different sweet, delicious dessert. These desserts were yummy, I
chose many desserts, like raspberry cream with mini cakes, banana ice-cream
with mango…. These desserts were all
delicious! My cousin tried many mango puddlings because it is her favourite. It
is my favourite too, but I was too full, so I did not eat it.
My two year old baby cousin ate
the banana ice-cream too. However, she ate the bottom of the cone, so all the
ice-cream fell down at the bottom. All the people sitting at the table saw it.
My aunt put that ice-cream cone on the plate quickly and cleaned the ice-cream
which was on my cousin’s T-shirt. It was so funny, so it made me laugh.
That day trip was very
delightful. However, I ate too much food, so I had a stomachache and went to
the washroom all night! I will not eat too much food in the future! I hope I
will go to eat more delicious food!
Lots of love,
Michael
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