Friday, April 13, 2012

The Lion and the Mouse by Lily


Once upon a time a huge lion and a small mouse lived in a green and big forest.
The huge lion was sleeping in his cave.
In a moment, he ran to the lion.The small mouse woke up the huge lion.The huge lion caught the small mouse and said “I will eat you , small mouse !” “Huge lion don’t eat me , I will help you one day!”The small frightened mouse said . Then , the huge lion though “The small mouse maybe can help me.”The huge lion wanted to find some food to eat ,but the huge lion ran into a net .After that ,the huge lion shouted, “Help!Help!Who can help me?”The heard the
lion shout for help . He ran to help the huge .
Finally , they became friends .They learnt that we should not look drown other.

3 comments:

  1. I like your fable because you have adjective but you can write more words,good job!

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  2. I like your fable because you have good taking senten but I see your work is not more adjective.

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  3. I like your fable,but you can write more words,good job!

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