Friday, April 13, 2012

Little Red Riding Hood by Joanne


One nice day,there was a Little red girl.She lived happily with her mum in a small house.
“Can you help me to get some food and drinks to meet grandmother because she is sick?’’mum said. “Yes,I can,’’said Little red girl.Then,mum got some yummy food and some drinks for Little red girl like the strawberry cake,biscuits and a bottle of water.After that,Little red girl went to the forest.
Suddenly,she saw the sly wolf,but the Little red girl wouldn’t afraid of the cunning wolf because Little red girl didn’t know it was a wolf.And then,the sly wolf said to Little red girl, “The flowers are beautiful.You can take the flowers.’’Next,Little red girl picked some red flowers.And the wolf went to her grandmother’s house and ate up grandmother quickly.Then,the wolf wore grandmother’s clothes. “Oh,I forget to get the food and drinks for my grandmother,’’said the Little red girl.
“knock,knock!Can I come in,’’smiled Little red girl. “Yes,you can!’’said the cunning fox. “Grandmother.why are your eyes so big?’’said Little red girl.The sly wolf said, “Because I can see you clearly.’’Little red girl said, “Why are your mouth so big?’’Grandmother said, “Because I can eat you.’’And the wolf ate Little red girl.
Finally,a man came to the grandmother’s house and saw the wolf was full and he helped the Little red girl and the grandmother.
This story teaches us Don’t believe what others say.

10 comments:

  1. it is good because you use good

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  2. it is good because you use good word

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  3. I like your fable because you have a lot of words and you have many talking sentences,Good job!

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  4. I like your fable because you have so many adjective,Good job!^~^

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  5. I like it because it has many words.

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  6. Your writing is good because you have so many adjective.

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  7. Your friend,MelodyApril 16, 2012 at 5:20 AM

    I like your fable because it has many words and talking sentences,well done

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  8. I like your fable because it is ineresting and many words,good!

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  9. Chan Kai Lok, MichaelApril 16, 2012 at 6:50 AM

    I like your "LIttle Red Riding Hoods" fable very much! You use many interesting and fuuny talking sentences to make your fable more interesting. You use many good adjectives. After reading the fable I am so glad! You use a sound word in the talking sentence.
    keep going! ^_^

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  10. I like your fable very much beacuse you use many fuuny talking sentences to make your fable good. You use a lot of good adjectives. After reading your fable I am happy beacuse it is a happy ending. >.< ^^ @.@

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