Once upon a time ,in a beautiful forest ,there lived three little pigs . The first pig was Andy . He was hardworking The second pig was
Sunny He was more hardworking than Andy .The third pig was Mark .
He was the most hardworks .
One day ,the mother pig said ,''you will go to build your house,
because you are grown up.'' Then the three went to the forest to
their house .Andy used hay to build his house Sunny used sticks and
Mark used brike.
After that , a cunning wolf was hungry and wanted to eat three little yummy fat pig .The wolf went to Andy home and said in the kindest and the softest voice , ''Open your door ,open your door please.'' ''I will not open my door .If I open you will eat me .'' Then the wolf was angry . He huffed and puffed and blew down his house .I felt scared .Then , Andy went to Sunny home and said ''Open your door! Open your door! I am your brother! please! please!'' Then Sunny open the door and let Andy came in .
Then , the wolf came to Sunny home and the pig said , ''I will not open my door !If I open you will eat us !'' The wolf was angry .The wolf huffed and puffed and blew down his house . They were scared . They ran to Mark home and said, '' Open your door ! Open your door! I am your brother! please! please ! The wolf is coming !'' The brother said.
Later , the wolf came to Mark home and said , '' Open your door ! Open your door! He huffed and puffed and blew down his house, but
he house was not blown down because the house was very strong .The
wolf went down trougth a chimney , but there a pot of hot water .The wolf fell in the hot water and died .
I Iearnt we should not be lazy.
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ReplyDeleteYour writing is very good~ Also, I think you can be better!^.^And
you helped that pigs to have a name~>.<
Good work^^
Phoebe0v0
You are right, Phoebe! She was very creative because she gave the pigs names. Good job, Seby! :)
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