Friday, April 13, 2012

The Lion and the Mouse by Andy Tam


Once upon a time, there lived a hungry lion and a helpful mouse in a very big forest.
One day, the lion saw a mouse. The lion said, “I am hungry. I want to eat you.” The mouse cried, “Let me go! Let me go! I will help you next time.” The lion let the mouse go.
At night, the mouse heard the lion shouting. “Help me! Help me! The lion cried.” The mouse saw lion in a net. Then, the mouse bit the net to help the lion.
Lastly, the lion got out form the net. “Thank you! Mouse,” the lion said to mouse. Soon, they were good friends.
The lion learnt that we should be kind and helpful. He learnt his lesson.

6 comments:

  1. very good because it has many adj

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  2. I think you can write more words Good Job!

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  3. Very good, because I like this story.

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  4. I like your fable because you have diffrent words

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  5. The moral is good, can you wirte more words!

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