Friday, April 13, 2012

Cinderella by Hitomi


Once upon a time,in a house lived a beautiful girl.Her name was Cinderella.This girl looked like an angel.
Cinderella’s mother died when she was very small so her father wanted to find a have a good step-mother .She had a bad step-mother and two bad step-sisters as her mother and sisters.
The two bad step-sisters and bad step-mother hit Cinderella,gave all the work for her to do,like cleaning all of the clothes ,and sometimes they said“When you don’t finish your work, you can’t eat rice. ” Cinderella felt very sad and she thought“Why does everyone hit me? ” when Cinderella slept she would cry too.
A nine day,the prince had a ball and Cinderella wanted to go.But her step-mother and step-sisters said“You couldn’t go to the ball because you don’t have clothes to wear. ” “But I want to go very much,” Cinderella said.Sadly,they didn’t let her go too. Cinderella was very sad.
The Fairy Godmother knew Cinderella wanted go to the ball,so she said, “I will help you.You get six mice and a clothes.”Then, Fairy Godmother changed the mice to a carriage ,clother changed to a beautiful gown. “You need to come home at 12o’clock.”
At the ball, Cinderella and prince danced.Afen12o’clock, Cinderella ran away. Cinderella’s one shoes was left with the prinse .The prince used the shoes to find Cinderella.Finally, Cinderella and prince married and happily together.
The two step-sisters and step-mother learnt don’t hit people,be kind to others and be friendly to others.
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16 comments:

  1. KaryApril 16, 2012 at 3:55 AM

    I like your fable is because you have many words and you have so many adjective.

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  2. YobeMakApril 16, 2012 at 4:02 AM

    I like your fable because you write so many adjective,Good job!

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  3. JoanneApril 16, 2012 at 4:16 AM

    I like your fable so much because it was very interesting and it had many saying words.After I read,I felt Cinderella is hardworking,but her step-mother and her step-sister are very bad.

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  4. lily liApril 16, 2012 at 4:18 AM

    I like your fable because you have woreds

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  5. wingApril 16, 2012 at 4:23 AM

    I like it because you have many words.

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  6. DavidszeApril 16, 2012 at 4:45 AM

    I like it because you have many words and it was very interesting.

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  7. RaineeApril 16, 2012 at 5:14 AM

    I like it because you can use the most classic story to write a fable.

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  8. RenoApril 16, 2012 at 5:16 AM

    I want to be a prince.

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  9. AgnesApril 16, 2012 at 5:21 AM

    You have many adjective and many words, good job!

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  10. Your friend,MelodyApril 16, 2012 at 5:26 AM

    I love your fable !!!!!!!it have many adjective to make me know Cinderella are beautiful!*****

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  11. EmilyApril 16, 2012 at 5:36 AM

    I like your fable so much because it was very interesting ,it had many saying ,it have many adjective.It was interesting.Good job!

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  12. AnonymousApril 16, 2012 at 6:27 AM

    I like your fable because it is ineresting and it has many talking sentence,very good!

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  13. hitomiApril 16, 2012 at 6:30 AM

    I think I can do better in this fable,I hope next time I can do better than this time.Thank you comments my fable.

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  14. good friend,nicoleApril 16, 2012 at 6:43 AM

    I like your fable because you have many word

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  15. samApril 16, 2012 at 6:52 AM

    your have many words and I like your fable but I do not like priness

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  16. hitomiApril 16, 2012 at 7:45 AM

    Thank you comments my fable. Thank you everyone see my fable.I hope you will like my fable.Thank you once again to comments my fable.

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