Once upon a time,one smart pig and too lazy foolish pigs had to build their house by themselves.It was because their father and said they had grow up.The three little pigs said "I will make our house quickly.''
Next ,they found a place to build their houses.The big pig was the fastest one to build a place.He used hay to build his house .When the first pig finished building he just ate his lunch .
Then, the second pig was the second one to find a place to build his house .He was lazy too,so he just used stiek to build the house .He finised build his house quickly. He thought ''Will my house break?''
After that,the strongest third pig the smartest one as bricks to build the house. He used a long time to build the house. When the pig finisted build ,he said ''My house is the strogest!''
Later the fox came .He wanted to eat the first pig by blowing his house down. Then,he wanted to eat the second pig by blowing his house down again.The pigs ran to the third pig's house.The third pig's house was very strong ,so the wolf could not blow the house down.The wolf was angry
so he ran away.
Then ,the wolf was sent to hospital because the wolf used a lot of offort to blow down the house .At last ,the pigs knew they were wrong did not do things quickly.
I think your writing is very good, Nicole. I like the fable because you used many adjectives and you talk about the pigs in order. Thank you for trying your best! :)
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