Friday, April 13, 2012

The Lion and the Mouse by Juno


Once upon a time, a big lion and a small mouse lived in a green forest. The hungry lion liked to eat small animals because the lion was very hungry.
One sunny day, the big lion caught the small mouse. It felt scared, the mouse said, “Let me go, I will help you next time.” The lion said “You may go.”
The next day, the lion walked in to a big net. The lion said, “Help Me! Help Me!”The mouse heard his shout. Then the mouse went to save the lion by biting the net. The
Lion said, “Thank you!” to the mouse.
Because the mouse helped the lion out of the net, the mouse and the lion became friends. The lion learnt that we should not look down on someone and the mouse learnt that we should help each other.

6 comments:

  1. i think you can do more word then it can be better

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  2. it was very good because it has many taking sentens

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  3. I like your fable because you write so many adjective,but I think you can write many words.Good job!

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  4. I like your fable because your fable have many correct word and have many tence correct.

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  5. I like your fable because you fable are interesting

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  6. I think you are try your best this time,try.

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