Friday, April 13, 2012

The Tortoise and the Hare by Sunny


Once Upon a time, in a forest there lived a fast hare and a slow tortoise. One day ,the fast hare and the slow tortoise wanted to know who ran faster .
Then, they found a Judge to see who ran the fastest. First, the fast hare ran very quickly and the hare saw the tortoise was walking the slowest.
After that, the hare thought, “the tortoise ran very slowly .Why don’t I sleep for a moment.” Then, the hare slept and slept under a tree.
In the end, the tortoise won this race. The tortoise felt very excited because he won in this race. This story says, ”Don•t give up” and “Don•t look down on other people.”

7 comments:

  1. i like your fable because you use many adjectives

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  2. This story tall us do not give up.

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  3. You have many saiding words but can you write more words because it have little words!

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  4. I like your fable because you use many good adjectives but I thing you can write more words than this fable.

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    1. I like your fable because you use many good adjectives but I think you can write more words than this fable. (write wrong)

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  5. you fable have many adjectives and fun

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  6. You have many adj but youn don't have the good spelling

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