Friday, April 13, 2012

Two Friends by Melody


Once upon a time, there were two good friends. Their names were Tom and Sam. They looked very cute. They lived happily together in the city. One Sunny day, Tom and Sam went to the beautiful forest to have a Christmas party.
When they felt very glad, there was a fat bear who came out and wanted to eat them! Tom and Sam felt very scared. Tom said to Sam, ”What can we do now?” but Sam disappeared. He ran away!
Sam ran very quickly to the foot of the tree and climbed up a big tree. Sam said to Tom, “Sorry, Tom, I cannot help you are too fat. You cannot climb up the tree!” Tom felt very scared. He thought, “The bear hates dead people. I can lay down and the bear will think I have died already,” So, he lay down quickly. The fat bear went to smell Tom for a long time.
After the bear had gone, Sam climbed down and asked Tom,” What did the bear say to you?” Tom said,” The bear said don’t be friends with those who do not help you when you have problems.” Finally, Tom left. Sam felt very sad because he lost a friend.

13 comments:

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    1. Chan Kai Lok,MichaelApril 16, 2012 at 4:02 AM

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