Friday, April 13, 2012

The Greedy Dog by Michael


Once upon a time, a selfish dog lived in the pretty forest. On a wonderful day, the dog found a delicious bone. The bone was huge and juicy. The dog thought, “I will eat the tasty bone at home because it is more comfortable to eat there.”
On the way home, he walked along a long bridge by the clear river. He saw a lovely dog in the reflection of the clear water who had a yummy bone in his big mouth, too. The selfish dog thought, “I want that tasty big bone, too.” Then, he opened his mouth to get the big bone, the bone fell down into the clear water. “Splash!” “Oh! My god, I did not have any bone for my dinner,” barked the dog. He was crying loudly. He saw the lovely dog in the reflection of the clear water was crying, too. He tried to get the bone, but he could not get. Then, he though carefully, “When I dropped the bone in the river, in the reflection of clear water dog were dropped down the bone too. When I cried, he cried too.” Now, he knew the truth. “Oh! That dog is me!”
Now, he knew not to be too greedy and selfish. If you are greedy, at the end, you will not have anything.
Do not be Greedy!

14 comments:

  1. I like your fable because there are many funny and interested in reading your fable. I think you use a lot of time to do it because I see your fable is colourful.

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    1. Chan Kai Lok, MichaelApril 17, 2012 at 6:35 AM

      thank you so much!

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  2. I enjoy your fable a lot because you have many pretty picture and interesting talking sentences. It make me know about the dog.

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    1. Chan Kai Lok, MIchaelMay 14, 2012 at 5:04 AM

      thank you so much!

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  3. I like your fable because you talk about the dog was greedy.

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  4. I like your fable very much because it had many saying words and many adjective.After that,I think you are hardworking in it.What a nice fable!

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  5. I like your fable because you have many adjective

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  6. I like your fable very much because it had many saying words and many adjective.After that,I think you are hardworking in it.Good job!

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  7. I like it because you write many adjective.But last sentence you didn`t worte (I know).

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  8. you write many adjective and I think you are hardworking.

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  9. I like it because you write many adjective

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  10. I like your fable because you write many good words and have many talking sentences.I think you are very hardworking in this fable.Good jog!

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  11. you fable is so fun have many good word

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  12. your fable is so funny because you have good talking sentences.

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