Friday, April 13, 2012

The Three Little Pigs by David


Once upon a time,there were three little pigs in the big forest. Their mother needed them to build a house for for themselves because they were big.
The three little pigs wanted to build a house for themselves. The first fat pig used some hay to make a house. He used two weeks to build it. The second tall pig used some wood to make a house. He used two weeks to build it too.The third clever pig used some bricks to make a very beautiful and strong house. He also used two weeks to build it.
Then,the three little pigs ate a bowl of yummy congee in their own house.One strong wolf knocked on the door and said,"Open the door!""No!I will not open the door!",said the first fat pig.The strong wolf felt very angry and he blew and blew the first pig's house into the sky.
Next,the first pig ran quickly to the second pig's home to hide. The wolf walked after the first pigs and went to the second pig's home and said,"Open the door!". The wolf blew and blew and the second pig's house also blew into the sky. The second pig and first little pig went to the third clever pig's home.
And then, the wolf went to the third pig's home and blew and blew .He can't blew the house up into the sky and blew it stronger again. He also can't blew it and he climbed up to chimney.The pigs quickly to make a fire.
Finally,the silly wolf was die.

7 comments:

  1. This is a great story, David. It is easy to read because you write about each pig in order. The talking sentences also make it interesting. Good job!

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  2. Oh,it is good!You try to write more word and more adjective.You can
    try more hard. . .
    ^

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    1. I like your fable because you use many good adjectives and words.

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  3. I like your fable because your fable is funny and you have many correct word.

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  4. you fable is funny I like

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