Dear Melody,
How are you? I
really hope you can come to Guang Zhou and play with me.
Last month, my family
and I went to Guang Zhou temple to eat yummy food like Japanese food because my
aunt had a baby boy for one month. Other aunt said,’’ You need to come, if we
do not come I will not happy!'' so I talked to my grandma . We could go to
Guang Zhou because I wanted to see my sister! When I heard my grandma say we
could go , I was
very happy and thanked
grandma .
At night, we
went down to eat the tasty food. I saw there was so many people and tables.
We ate many
food , so we did not feel hungry , and we ate the watermelon. My brother said
he wanted to go home , so we asked the uncle to go home.
We went to the temple
and sat down. The chair was like a circle. There were some starters like eggs ,
peanuts, sweets...Then I could hear all people sitting down . Then some people
went and gave some other a plate of yummy fish , tasty shrimp and a bowl of
sole soup... I ate the fish and drank two bowls of soup, but the soup had many
sweets because they put some sweets in there.
The next day, we went
to a restaurant to eat breakfast. I ate some dim sum , noodles, turnip cake
...I thought this was very yummy. Then we needed to go home, so we went to
another home.
When we go to our
home, we saw our grandfather felt very, so grandma was very happy.
Lots of love,
Seby
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ReplyDeleteNicole :
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Dear Seby,
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