Monday, December 10, 2012

Eating Out by Sally



Dear sun
How are you? My family and I went to eat my birthday dinner on my birthday.
   Last Sunday was my eleven years old birthday. My mum ,dad and I go to the Chinese restaurant eat dinner in Sui Sai Wan . My dad chose this restaurant because this restaurant food was so yummy. In this restaurant , I will eat my birthday dinner there.
    First. In the Chinese restaurant I could see some dragons picture at the back. It was very beautiful. I smell some yummy food. I thought it was so yummy. And my dad asked the waiter, and the waiter gave us some menu dad ordered the food and said think you. I chose the fried rice because I like eating fried rice very much. That was tasty and very yummy and fresh. My dad chose the dim sum because he likes them very much. I like dim sum too, and my mum chose the lobster soup because it was very fresh. My mum likes to eat the lobster soup very much. I chose the crispy food. My family gave a present to me whach, it was a dress. It is beautiful.
     I felt delighted in this restaurant because it could eat a lot of tasty, crispy and yummy food. I was so excited in that day.
     I like birthday very much. When we got home my birthday dessert was cheese cake, I like cheese cake because it was yummy. I’m very excited. A big you to thank my family.
Lot of love,
Sally Chan
                                                                                  

4 comments:

  1. It is colourful and interesting!Well done!

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  2. your writing is colourful, I love it.

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  3. your writing is colourful

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  4. Sally,
    Your e-mail is very good because you use many colour but I think you can use more different adjective make it more interesting and your words colour can make easily to see. Frighting!

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