Dear sun
How are you? My family and I went to eat my birthday
dinner on my birthday.
Last Sunday was my
eleven years old birthday. My mum ,dad and I go to the Chinese restaurant eat
dinner in Sui Sai Wan . My dad chose this restaurant because this restaurant
food was so yummy. In this restaurant , I will eat my birthday dinner there.
First. In the
Chinese restaurant I could see some dragons picture at the back. It was very beautiful.
I smell some yummy food. I thought it was so yummy. And my dad asked the
waiter, and the waiter gave us some menu dad ordered the food and said think
you. I chose the fried rice because I like eating fried rice very much. That
was tasty and very yummy and fresh. My dad chose the dim sum because he likes them
very much. I like dim sum too, and my mum chose the lobster soup because it was
very fresh. My mum likes to eat the lobster soup very much. I chose the crispy
food. My family gave a present to me whach, it was a dress. It is beautiful.
I felt delighted
in this restaurant because it could eat a lot of tasty, crispy and yummy food.
I was so excited in that day.
I like birthday very much. When we got
home my birthday dessert was cheese cake, I like cheese cake because it was
yummy. I’m very excited. A big you to thank my family.
Sally Chan
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