Hi
Hay2,
How are you? I really hope you can enjoy this
amazing barbeque party.
Last Friday, my dad took us to Stanley to enjoy a
barbeque party to play and eat. It was amazing. I went the barbeque party because
my mum and dad wanted to celebrate my ten year old birthday.
In the Stanley
barbeque party, mum gave a new big and organization good basketball to me and I
was very astonished and surprised. I thought my mum was the kindest in the world.
Then, I was excited to go to play basketball to shoot the basketball hoop.
Next, I saw many people in there I did not know who it was but we became
friends was called Andy. AT first, in the party, I saw a magnificent castle and
saw the kind waiter. I thought the waiter was kind because he said some things politely
and had a big happy smile.
After that, we began to barbeque some
delectable food like the big fishball, long sausage, salty oysters… to eat. The
food were very mellow but it was very spicy because Zeta put some chilli in my
food when I was playing. The food looked like a crab. Zeta chose small chicken
wings but she said she wanted to keep fit, so her chicken wings were too small.
In there I heard very noisy sounds and I could not listen to what my parents
said to me. It was very very noisy.
I really hope you can enjoy this barbeque
party, so that you can enjoy some delicious and spicy food excitedly together.
It will be in Stanley
on the barbeque grounds. At last, I was very exhausted went home.
Best friends,
Hay
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