Eating Out
Dear Aunt
Mary,
Last Sunday, Tom, mum, dad and I went to the
Seafood Chinese restaurant in Causeway
Bay because it was my
Aunt’s birthday. I enjoy it very much because I could eat many yummy foods in
there.
There were many beautiful lights everywhere and there were many
Chinese people who came to this Chinese restaurant. The waiter who wore blue clothes showed us to our
three tables, but we
waited by the door on the chairs. A polite waiter
gave us some colourful menus. There were many
people talking and pretty decorations. We sang a birthday song to my aunt, gave
the present to her – it was some beautiful clothes, said birthday wishes to her
and played games. We played chess and felt very glad after eating.
Tom wanted to
eat hot fried rice with vegetables. It was very yummy and tasty. My dad chose the
fresh and delish. The seafood included shrimps and a crab. My mum ordered big
fish and many small dim sum because it was very fresh and rare. I tried to eat special
food, so I carefully chose a plate
of fried noodles with small shrimps and chicken wings
because it was very spicy, crispy and yummy. We ate until we were full, bloated
and stuffed but Tom said, “I am not full from the food!’’ We felt very excited
and delighted in this beautiful and joyful day. We drank coke, sour lemon juice
and tea.
This day, I felt very excited and glad because
we played games and gave the present to my aunt. Aunt Mary enjoyed this day
because I saw my aunt ate many foods in there. I hope my aunt enjoyed this
birthday.
Lots of love,
Emily Chu
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