Monday, December 10, 2012

Eating Out by Melody



Dear Nicole,
   Hi! How are you? Do you have a nice holiday? I want to share what I did on my birthday.
   Last weekend, my Mum and Dad took me to Pizza Hut in Causeway Bay because I like to eat Italian Food. It also celebrated my 10th birthday. I felt very excited and glad.
   We waited for long time for a table because there were many people eating inside. When I was waiting, I talked to my Mum and Dad. When we got there, I saw waiters and waitress. There were some plates and glasses of water on the table. There were many beautiful photographs about food on the wall. I also heard some lovely music.
   We looked at the menu and chose the food that we wanted. For the starter, I wanted the fresh seafood salad, the salad was made up of prawns, crab, clams, mussels and vegetable. Mum ordered yummy garlic bread and Dad had cream soup. All of the food were very fresh. When we finished the starter, we ordered the main course. I chose the crispy prawn pizza instead of the fired noodles with vegetable. Mum tried the tomato sauce noodles, but it was so sour. Dad likes to eat raw seafood, so he tasted the seafood plate, that was cool. And then, it was time for dessert. I easily chose the chocolate flavour ice-cream because I like sweet and smooth food, it looked yummy. Mum wanted to try something special, so she want the ice-cream with milk tea. Dad drank a cup of coffee. I think it was so bitter, but Dad likes
Coffee very much.
   When we finished the food, Mum and Dad gave me my birthday present-a new story about a cute dog, I like reading very much and I thanked my Mum and Dad. After Dad paid the bill at the cashier, we went home happily with the full tummy.
   I felt fascinated that night. I also want to invite you to the Christmas Party on 25 th December, the place is at my home. We will play games, eat food and exchange the presents on that day. Welcome you to come!
   I need to eat dinner now. Chat later, bye bye!
Your Friend
Melody

11 comments:

  1. Melody,
    I like your e-mail because your e-mail last sentense write"I need to eat dinner now. Chat later, bye bye!" It is interesting. By the way, Well Done!

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  2. I like your E-mail too because you used a lot of adj!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  3. I think your e-mail can be more colourful because only had black

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  4. Melody
    I am very like your e-mail because you wrote many different food in your e-mail. Well done!

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  5. I like your e-mail very much because you used beautiful word shape,so that you can make your e-mail more special! I think you can use more colours to write the word,it to make your e-mail more colour.WELL DONE!

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  6. I like your e-mail because your e-mail had a lot of adjective,but I think you can used more colour to make your e-mail more colourful and interesting

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  7. I like your E-mail too because you used a lot of adj.

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  8. I think you writing not colorful but have many word

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  9. The food look yummy and the email is interesting.

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  10. Melody :
    Your writing is very interestihg and it have many adj .It make me want to eat the yummy food!!!

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  11. Your writing it have many adj but you can write color

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