Dear
Nicole,
Hi! How are you? Do you have a nice holiday?
I want to share what I did on my birthday.
Last
weekend, my Mum and Dad took me to Pizza Hut in Causeway Bay because I like to
eat Italian Food. It also celebrated my 10th birthday. I felt very
excited and glad.
We waited for long time for a table because
there were many people eating inside. When I was waiting, I talked to my Mum
and Dad. When we got there, I saw waiters and waitress. There were some plates
and glasses of water on the table. There were many beautiful photographs about
food on the wall. I also heard some lovely music.
We looked at the menu and chose the food
that we wanted. For the starter, I wanted the fresh seafood salad, the salad
was made up of prawns, crab, clams, mussels and vegetable. Mum ordered yummy
garlic bread and Dad had cream soup. All of the food were very fresh. When we
finished the starter, we ordered the main course. I chose the crispy prawn
pizza instead of the fired noodles with vegetable. Mum tried the tomato sauce
noodles, but it was so sour. Dad likes to eat raw seafood, so he tasted the
seafood plate, that was cool. And then, it was time for dessert. I easily chose
the chocolate flavour ice-cream because I like sweet and smooth food, it looked
yummy. Mum wanted to try something special, so she want the ice-cream with milk
tea. Dad drank a cup of coffee. I think it was so bitter, but Dad likes
Coffee
very much.
When we finished the food, Mum and Dad gave
me my birthday present-a new story about a cute dog, I like reading very much
and I thanked my Mum and Dad. After Dad paid the bill at the cashier, we went
home happily with the full tummy.
I felt fascinated that night. I also want to
invite you to the Christmas Party on 25 th December, the place is at
my home. We will play games, eat food and exchange the presents on that day.
Welcome you to come!
I need to eat dinner now. Chat later, bye
bye!
Your
Friend
Melody
Melody,
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ReplyDeleteMelody
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ReplyDeleteMelody :
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Your writing it have many adj but you can write color
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