To: happy@gmail.com
Dear Grandfather,
How are you? Last weekend, cousin Jake
came to Hong Kong. I was very excited. If you come to Hong Kong, I will be
happier.
Last Sunday, Jake came to Siu Sai
Wan to find us. Then, mum took us to a Tea Restaurant because it was Jake’s
first time to come to Hong Kong and mum wanted to give him some special foods
to eat. However, there were many people inside because that day was Sunday. So,
we waited for a long time for a table. We sat on the chair to wait. Jake was
very bored, so I thought a Chinese game to play with him. We were very happy.
When we had a table, I walked in to
the restaurant. There were many people inside. It was very noisy. However, I
saw some interesting things, there were some pictures, a big picture was of a
big dragon. I like it very much.
Jake likes to eat fresh seafood, so he
ordered the chilli shrimp. Jake said he didn’t eat chilli shrimp in China, so
dad wanted to give him some special food in Hong Kong. Mum and I like ate salty
porridge, so we chose the flavorful fish porridge. Dad wanted to try something
special, so he tried some rich Dim Sum, like shrimp dumplings, bread and Xiao Long
Bao.
Then, we ate all of the
beautiful foods. I asked Jake is these foods were right? He said they were
yummy, but the chilli shrimp was very spicy. Dad and mum paid the bill at the
cashier. I know Jake likes played football, so I opened my bag and took a new
clean football for him. He shouted ,“Wow!…” and said many times “Thank you!”. I
think he was very surprised and excited.
If you can come to Hong Kong, I will
take you to the nice Tea Restaurant. It is very special, because it has many
yummy foods. I think you will enjoy it. Jake will go to China on Tuesday. I
think he liked Hong Kong. If Jake will come to Hong Kong again, can you come
here together?
Love,
Susanna
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